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회원님의 영작문

Finland is environmental advanced nation.
When I think about environment engineering, the major have many root from many country.
If there is the successful tech, another country takes that and advances suiting their country.
Therefore to become expert, I think I need to learn in environmental advanced countries.
I want to find various job about the major and to extent my job stage in world wide.
Metropolia university, as Finland's largest university of applied sciences, can help me become expert.
Helsinki is known to environmental model city. I want to learn environmental life style in the city.
In addition to, Finland is known about advanced education.
I heard that Finnish students are very smart like Korean students, but Finnish are far more happy when they are studying.
So I have wondered how to learn in Finland since I was young. I want to experience directly in Finnish education place.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Kang!

I am glad you answered this question.  Keep on answering the sample student interview questions for you to get used to them.  Good luck!

-T. Maine


Finland is environmental advanced nation.

>>Finland is an environmentally advanced nation.
 When I think about environment engineering, the major have many root from many country.

>>When I think about the environmental engineering, it has many branches from many countries.
 If there is the successful tech, another country takes that and advances suiting their country.

>>If there is a successful technology, another country takes that and adjusts if it is suitable to their country.
 Therefore to become expert, I think I need to learn in environmental advanced countries.

>>Therefore, to become an expert, I think I need to study in an environmentally advanced country.
 I want to find various job about the major and to extent my job stage in world wide.

>>I want to find various jobs about my chosen major and extend my job range worldwide.
 Metropolia university, as Finland's largest university of applied sciences, can help me become expert.

>>Metropolia University is Finland's largest university of applied sciences.  I believe this institution will help me become the person I want to be.
 Helsinki is known to environmental model city. I want to learn environmental life style in the city.

>>Helsinki is known for as an environmental model city.  I want to learn the environmental lifestyle in that city.
 In addition to, Finland is known about advanced education. 

>>In addition, Findland is known for its advanced education.
 I heard that Finnish students are very smart like Korean students, but Finnish are far more happy when they are studying.

>>I heard that Finnish students are very smart like Koreans, but Finish are far happier when they are studying.
 So I have wondered how to learn in Finland since I was young. I want to experience directly in Finnish education place.

>>So I have been dreaming of studying in Finland since I was young.  I am eager to experience the education system in that country.
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