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1. You always have to make eye contact with prospective employers.
2. What do you do? I work advertising
3. functionality is a common way of saying "functions or features".
4. A vendor is an outside company with whom your company has a business relationship.
5. IBM provides a variety of networking solutions for its clients.
6. If you own a lot of stock in a company, you are considered one of its major
7. In business, downtime is either a period when some kind of machinery isn't working, or a slow period.
8. One of our corporate objectives is to develop strategic relationships with key customers.
9. You have to be less competitive and more cooperative
10. Our goal is to provide customers with high-quality products at competent prices.

Covid-19 vaccination has a various side effect. Despite having side effect, we must take a vaccination.
i want to hope many people do not die and our life recover before corona
many people having a hard time, but i think that we can overcome.

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Hello Stella,


I know that you do have a beautiful heart, that why you are beautiful inside and out.

Have the courage to study English because I know that you can speak the language well.

T. Jeny


1. You always have to make eye contact with prospective employers.
>>correct
2. What do you do? I work advertising
>>in advertising
3. functionality is a common way of saying "functions or features".
>>correct
4. A vendor is an outside company with whom your company has a business relationship.
>>correct
5. IBM provides a variety of networking solutions for its clients.
>>correct
6. If you own a lot of stock in a company, you are considered one of its major
>>shareholders
7. In business, downtime is either a period when some kind of machinery isn't working, or a slow period.
>>correct
8. One of our corporate objectives is to develop strategic relationships with key customers.
>>correct
9. You have to be less competitive and more cooperative
>>correct
10. Our goal is to provide customers with high-quality products at competent prices.

>> competitive
Covid-19 vaccination has a various side effect. 
>>Covid-19 vaccination has various side effects. 
Despite having side effect, we must take a vaccination.
>>Despite having side effects, we must take the vaccination.
i want to hope many people do not die and our life recover before corona
>>I hope, people do not die and we can recover our lives back before corona.
many people having a hard time, but i think that we can overcome.
>>Many people are having a hard time, but I think we can overcome this problem.
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