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If parents teach their children Korean culture, they can be preserved. Korean culture has many unique features that differentiate itself from other countries. Many Koreans take pride in Korean culture. This is because many parents well educated their children about Korean culture.

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Hi Yeong! ^^

The best way to preserve your culture is to keep it alive. Gather as a group not just for holidays, but for ordinary meals, events, or just conversation. Many aspects of culture are difficult to learn in books and museums, including etiquette, body language, and humor.

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If parents teach their children Korean culture, they can be preserved. 
>>If parents teach their children Koreas culture, it can be preserved. 

Korean culture has many unique features that differentiate itself from other countries. 
>> Korea's culture have many unique features that differentiate itself from other countries. 

Many Koreans take pride in Korean culture. 
>>Many Koreans take pride from Korean culture. 

This is because many parents well educated their children about Korean culture.
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