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I think science is the most important subject. Because science and technology are very valuable in modern times. With the rapid development of science and technology, there have been many changes in human life. Therefore, I think science is the most important subject.

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Hi Yeong! ^^

People overwhelmingly say math has been the most valuable subject in their lives, with English and science essentially tied for second. All subjects are important still. :)

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I think science is the most important subject. Because science and technology are very valuable in modern times. 
>>I think Science is the most important subject because it is valuable during modern times. 

With the rapid development of science and technology, there have been many changes in human life. 
>>With the rapid development of Science and Technology, there have been many changes in human life. 

Therefore, I think science is the most important subject.
>> Therefore, I think Science is the most important subject.

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