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I'm not good at cook, so I've never gotten an A in my practical class. Oh! Occasionally, in my school, we have cooking tests in technology class. However, it is not possible these days because most of the group activities are performance evaluations.
I took a cooking class only once when I was in 6th grade in our school. At that time, it was an activity that I would cook by myself and give a prize to the person who receives the most stickers, but I did not know what to cook at that time, so I just mixed tuna, kimchi, rice, kimjaban, mayonnaise, green onion, sesame oil, and sesame. And I make a delicious drug (meaning I can't stop) rice ball. So I became 1st. But, I took my first culinary skills test in my middle school, but I failed beautifully. So, after all, because of my confidence issues, I want to be good at cooking!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there again Maria!

Cooking is feeling and tasting. If you put more time to practice and be better at this skill, you can absolutely start now while you are young. Try observing your mother and ask questions when she prepares in the kitchen. Moreover, watch videos on simple ways to prepare food with a few ingredients yet deliciously made.

By being patient with your mistakes and trying harder with the next dish is the way to be a better home cook. Who knows someday, you can also be a master chef!

Thank you and see you!

-T. Donna =)

I'm not good at cook, so I've never gotten an A in my practical class. 
>> I'm not good at cooking, so I've never gotten an A in my practical class. 

Oh! Occasionally, in my school, we have cooking tests in technology class. 
>> Correct!

However, it is not possible these days because most of the group activities are performance evaluations.
>> Correct!

I took a cooking class only once when I was in 6th grade in our school. 
>> Correct!

At that time, it was an activity that I would cook by myself and give a prize to the person who receives the most stickers, but I did not know what to cook at that time, so I just mixed tuna, kimchi, rice, kimjaban, mayonnaise, green onion, sesame oil, and sesame. 
>> At that time, it was an activity that I would cook by myself and they will give a prize to the person who receives the most stickers, but I did not know what to cook at that time, so I just mixed tuna, kimchi, rice, kimjaban, mayonnaise, green onion, sesame oil, and sesame. 

And I make a delicious drug (meaning I can't stop) rice ball. So I became 1st. 
>> And I made a delicious drug (meaning, I can't stop) rice ball. So I became 1st. 

But, I took my first culinary skills test in my middle school, but I failed beautifully. 
>> But, I took my first culinary skills test in my middle school and I failed beautifully. 

So, after all, because of my confidence issues, I want to be good at cooking!
>>  Correct!
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