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I think it is society.
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Hi Kane! ^^

Yes! This is where you are going to write your answers. :) 

People overwhelmingly say math has been the most valuable subject in their lives, with English and science essentially tied for second. Society on the other hand is very important as well because we need to be aware of our world. All subjects are important still. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I think it is society.
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>> I think the most important subject is Society because we need to know a lot about this world and reality as well. 
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