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I manage my anger in rest.
Just lie down on my bed and take a deep breath with my eyes closed.

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Hi Kane! ^^

When you start feeling angry, try deep breathing, positive self-talk, or stopping your angry thoughts. Breathe deeply from your diaphragm. Slowly repeat a calm word or phrase such as "relax" or "take it easy." Repeat it to yourself while breathing deeply until the anger subsides.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I manage my anger in rest.
>> I manage my anger by resting. 

Just lie down on my bed and take a deep breath with my eyes closed.
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