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How would your friends describe you?

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Many people are like me. and I'm affectionate to people.
I heard many people feel comfortable to me. So they don't feel difficult to meet me.
I don't know exactly what makes them feel free, I'm happy to hang out with many friends easily even if they are strangers.
My friends often say "I've never seen a friend like you before."
They describe I'm extraordinary, but the time with me is happy to them.
They love my character.
I don't try to hide my real feeling badly.
I usually express my real feeling. So my friends don't need to find real meaning.
I'm easy to ask and to refuse somethings. I don't think seriously about that.
I don't have bad meaning when I refuse it, and I know they don't have too.
I think this character make people comfortable.
In addition to, my close friends often say "I can't live like you."
I'm look like very busy. They said you always do something,
I took many responsibilities when I'm in university.
I'm in many challenges now. I can't stand to do nothing.

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Hi Kang!

Well done in completing your answers.  Send me more of your answers as we continue our classes.  :)


-T. Maine


Many people are like me. and I'm affectionate to people.

>>Many peole like me because I am an outgoing and affectionate person.
 I heard many people feel comfortable to me. So they don't feel difficult to meet me.

>>I heard that many people feel comfortable with me, so they don't have difficulty meeting me.
 I don't know exactly what makes them feel free, I'm happy to hang out with many friends easily even if they are strangers.

>>I don't exactly know what makes them feel that way, but I'm happy hanging out with my friends even if we met for the first time.
 My friends often say "I've never seen a friend like you before."

>>My friends often say that they had never seen a friend like me before.
 They describe I'm extraordinary, but the time with me is happy to them.

>>They described me as an extraordinary person, but spending time with me made them jolly.
 They love my character.

>>They love my character.
 I don't try to hide my real feeling badly.

>>I don't try to hide my real feelings when I feel bad.
 I usually express my real feeling. So my friends don't need to find real meaning.

>>I usually express my real feelings, so my friends don't misunderstand me.
 I'm easy to ask and to refuse somethings. I don't think seriously about that.

>>It's easy for me to ask and refuse something. I don't think it is something serious.
 I don't have bad meaning when I refuse it, and I know they don't have too.

>>I don't have any bad meanings when I refuse something, and I know the don't have, too.
 I think this character make people comfortable.

>>I think this character makes people more comfortable.
 In addition to, my close friends often say "I can't live like you."

>>In addition, my close friends often say that they couldn't live like me.
 I'm look like very busy. They said you always do something,

>>I look lke a very busy person.  They said that I seemed to always do something.
 I took many responsibilities when I'm in university.

>>I had many responsibilities when I was in the university.
 I'm in many challenges now. I can't stand to do nothing.

>>I have many challenges now.  I think I can't stand doing nothing.  I need to accomplish what I have to do.


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