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What is the most difficult decision that you have had to make?

작성자: 이*현
2021-08-03 221

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I think all choice are difficult, but I try to choose doing my best, even if It will not be real best.
Nevertheless, the best difficult decision is to study for entree of great university.
When I was first and second grade in high school student, I loved playing and I hated studying.
Even if I enrolled at a great high school in my city I was frustrated that there are really many smarter students in my school.
I love to hang out with many friends, and I enjoy to go another place to play.
When the time to entrance exam go closely to me, I wanted to have a job I want.
To enroll the university I want, I had to study very hard.
So I decided to be crazy in studying for my future.
I'd never played before the exam since second grade's winter vacation.
Many friends and teachers were very surprised about this situation.
Finally, the efforts made the present, and I learned the way to try with persistent efforts.
I can do anythings with this experience since then.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Kang!

Good job in accomplishing your homework today.  Keep on doing your task for you to be familiar with the questions and check the given patterns, too.  :)


-T. Maine


I think all choice are difficult, but I try to choose doing my best, even if It will not be real best.

>>I think all choices are difficult, but I try to do my best even if it will not be the best.
 Nevertheless, the best difficult decision is to study for entree of great university.

>>Nevertheless, the most difficult decision is to study for an entree in a great university.
 When I was first and second grade in high school student, I loved playing and I hated studying.

>>When I was a freshman and sophomore in high school, I enjoyed playing and I hated studying.
 Even if I enrolled at a great high school in my city I was frustrated that there are really many smarter students in my school.

>>Even if I enrolled at a great high school  in my city, I was frustrated that there were really many smarter students in my school.
 I love to hang out with many friends, and I enjoy to go another place to play.

>>I love to hang out with my friends, and I enjoy going to another place to play.
 When the time to entrance exam go closely to me, I wanted to have a job I want.

>>As the time for the entrance exam moved closer, I eagerly wanted to have a job.
 To enroll the university I want, I had to study very hard.

>>I had to study hard to enter a university I wanted.
 So I decided to be crazy in studying for my future.

>>So I decided to put more effort in studying hard for my future.
 I'd never played before the exam since second grade's winter vacation.

>>I have never played before an exam since my sophomore's winter vacation.
 Many friends and teachers were very surprised about this situation.

>>Correct.
 Finally, the efforts made the present, and I learned the way to try with persistent efforts.

>>Finally, my efforts gave a good result.  And I learned the best way to try something with persistence.
 I can do anythings with this experience since then.

>>I can do many things with this experience since then.


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