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What do you think would happen if there was only one language in the entire world?

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If there is only one language in the entire world, it will be very comfortable to everyone living in this world.
If there is only one language in this world, we can communicate with foreigner more easier than before.
And also it will be very comfortable to travle other country or move to other country because in this world, there is only one language.
Social Network Survice don't have to offer to us various languages and we can learn a lot because we can read anything.
And the most important thing is we don't have to go to English academy anymore.
Instead of going English academy, we can learn other things or we can play with our friends.
So I think if there is only one language in the entire world, it will be very comfortable to everyone living in this world.

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Hi John! ^^

We could understand people so much better and there would never be any more language barriers. Business could be conducted in a simple manner and there would never be confusion because of a simple misunderstanding of words. What if we could all live as one human race, united together by a way of speaking. All brothers and sisters with one another free to speak among others and learn about others in a whole new way.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

If there is only one language in the entire world, it will be very comfortable to everyone living in this world.
>> If there is only one language, it will be very comfortable for everyone to live in this world. 

If there is only one language in this world, we can communicate with foreigner more easier than before.
>> We can communicate with foreigners more easier than before.

And also it will be very comfortable to travle other country or move to other country because in this world, there is only one language.
>> Also, it will be very comfortable to travel to other countries or move to other countries.

Social Network Survice don't have to offer to us various languages and we can learn a lot because we can read anything.
>> Social Network Services don't have to offer to us various languages and we can learn a lot because we can read anything.

And the most important thing is we don't have to go to English academy anymore.
>>The most important thing is we don't have to go to English academy anymore.

Instead of going English academy, we can learn other things or we can play with our friends.
>>Instead, we can learn other things or we can play with our friends.

So I think if there is only one language in the entire world, it will be very comfortable to everyone living in this world.
>> So I think if there is only one language in the entire world, it will be very comfortable for everyone. 
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