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studying english is exercise.

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My mother tongue is Korean.
I spek Korean and also thinkig of Korean. so I learned English, first step is learn by heart 'word' like apple, bus, parants.
I memorized the word yesterday, but I forget it right away if I don't see it again the next day.
Because my brain capacity is bounded.
If you want to English skil like mother tongue language, you need to every day memory word, sentence.
It is necessary repeat and repeat every day, same to exercise.
I experienced loose my muscle 2 years ago when I stopped the work out. my body was fat and body line is not pretty.
likewise I realize that I have to speak english sentence frequently, and memory more high - revel word.
The way to develop my english skill is only repeat every day and constant.
It is boring and sometimes feel dificult but not easy in the world.
My mind of learn english is marathon. It can be tired but never give up!
Like growing a muscle, my tongue is move for perfect accent and pronunciation.

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Hello there, Jessica!
(^__^)

This is a pretty long composition, but I've read it well.
I could feel your determination to improve your English skills and I admire you for that.
I am looking forward to studying with you again.
See you later! ^_^ Enjoy the rest of your day!

__T. Mayleen :)



My mother tongue is Korean.
>>> CORRECT
I spek Korean and also thinkig of Korean. so I learned English, first step is learn by heart 'word' like apple, bus, parants.
>>> I think and speak in Korean so the first step I did to learn English was to memorize simple words such as apple, bus, parents, etc.
I memorized the word yesterday, but I forget it right away if I don't see it again the next day.
>>> I tend to forget the words I memorized just a day ago if I don't encounter them again.
Because my brain capacity is bounded.
>>> I think my brain capacity is bounded/limited.
If you want to English skil like mother tongue language, you need to every day memory word, sentence.
>>> If you want to speak English like it's your mother tongue, you need to practice everyday.
It is necessary repeat and repeat every day, same to exercise.
>>> It is necessary to practice every day just like when you're exercising.
I experienced loose my muscle 2 years ago when I stopped the work out. my body was fat and body line is not pretty.
>>> I experienced loosing my toned muscles when I stopped to exercise 2 years ago. I gained weight and my body like wasn't pretty.
likewise I realize that I have to speak english sentence frequently, and memory more high - revel word.
>>> I realized that to speak English well, I have to memorize English expressions and practice hard.
The way to develop my english skill is only repeat every day and constant.
>>> The only way to develop my English skills is through constant practice.
It is boring and sometimes feel dificult but not easy in the world.
>>> It is sometimes boring and difficult.
My mind of learn english is marathon. It can be tired but never give up!
>>> Learning English is like joining a marathon. It is tiring, but you must never give up.
Like growing a muscle, my tongue is move for perfect accent and pronunciation.
>>> I have to exercise my facial muscle and my tongue for better pronunciation.
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