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1. What would you do if the relative university asked you to arrive at school by what date and you h

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If I face the problem, I will solve it through below ways.
First, I contact the managers of relative university few weeks ago before the exam.
I will go into detail about my situation to them.
After that, I will ask 2 ways to solve like below.
Please permit me to delay arrive date or please send the official letter which make me absent the important exam.
If they choose second way, I will find out the regulation about absent of this exam, and I will ask the letter which can be approve by the exam organization.
I think nothing can not do.
When I face other problem, I can solve calmly doing my best.

2.
If I have F grade, It might be 2 reason.
My score exactly low, or professor make mistake.
To find out real reason, I will ask to see my exam paper and scoring standard.
If the F grade is mistake, It can be solved this way.
However, If the reason is real score, I will send e-mail or visit to the professor.
After that, I will politely ask to change my grade going into detail condition.

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1. What would you do if the relative university asked you to arrive at school by what date, but you don't arrive by that date because of important exam?
If I face the problem, I will solve it through below ways.
>> If I face this problem, I will solve it through these ways below.

First, I contact the managers of relative university few weeks ago before the exam.
>> First, I will contact the managers of the university few weeks ago before the exam.
Hello there again Kang Hyeon!

I will go into detail about my situation to them.
>> Correct!

After that, I will ask 2 ways to solve like below.
>> After that, I will ask two ways to solve this matter.

Please permit me to delay arrive date or please send the official letter which make me absent the important exam.
>> I will ask them to please permit me to delay the arrival date or send the official letter which made me absent during the important exam.

If they choose second way, I will find out the regulation about absent of this exam, and I will ask the letter which can be approve by the exam organization.
>> If they choose the second way, I will find out the regulation about being absent for this exam, and I will ask the letter which can be approved by the exam organization.

I think nothing can not do.
>> I think there is nothing that cannot be done.

When I face other problem, I can solve calmly doing my best.
>> When I face the other problems, I can solve them calmly doing my best.


2. What would you do if you get F grade?"
If I have F grade, It might be 2 reason.
>> If I have an F grade, it might be for two reasons.

My score exactly low, or professor make mistake.
>> My score can be exactly low, or the professor made a mistake.

To find out real reason, I will ask to see my exam paper and scoring standard.
>> To find out the real reason, I will ask to see my exam paper and scoring standard.

If the F grade is mistake, It can be solved this way.
>> If the F grade is a mistake, it can be solved this way.

However, If the reason is real score, I will send e-mail or visit to the professor.
>> However, if the reason is because of the real score, I will send an e-mail or visit the professor.

After that, I will politely ask to change my grade going into detail condition.
>> After that, I will politely ask to change my grade going into details and conditions on how it needs to be processed.

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