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Are you well-adjusted to urban living?

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Are you well-adjusted to urban living?
Of course I`m sure I`m well-adjusted to urban living. I get along with neighbors and friends, and the convenient of urban living makes comfortable.

What are the career opportunities in urban area?
If we have the will to succeed, we can find something to do. for example, white and blue collar job, IT divisions etc. I think there are a lot of the career opportunities in urban area.

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Are you well-adjusted to urban living?

Of course I`m sure I`m well-adjusted to urban living. 
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I get along with neighbors and friends, and the convenient of urban living makes comfortable.
>>> I get along with neighbors and friends, and the convenience of urban living makes it comfortable.   

What are the career opportunities in urban area?
If we have the will to succeed, we can find something to do. 
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For example, white and blue collar job, IT divisions etc. 
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I think there are a lot of the career opportunities in urban area.
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