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I just want to master English and communicate people in English without hesitation and fluently.
But if I have to learn another languages, I¡¯d like to learn another languages, Chinese and Spanish. Because they are the first and second most used languages around the world.

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Hi there Ms. Joshua!

Speaking other languages can have a lot of benefits. However, in our age, they will demand a lot of time to practice and learn. Learning a new language can be rewarding in terms of accessing new knowledge and gaining more associates. On the other hand, we need much time and money to master one.

Thank you for your answer for today's homework. I hope to read more of your composition next time!

-T. Donna =)

I just want to master English and communicate people in English without hesitation and fluently.
>> I just want to master English and communicate to people in English without hesitation and fluently.

But if I have to learn another languages, I¡¯d like to learn another languages, Chinese and Spanish. 
>> But if I have to learn other languages, I¡¯d like to learn Chinese and Spanish. 

Because they are the first and second most used languages around the world.
>> They are the first and second most used languages around the world.
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