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What advice would you give a foreigner visiting your country who would like to show good manners?

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Not all the foreigners do that but sometimes, a few foreigners talk very loudly and the other people may get bad emotions.
So I think if the foreigners don't do that, the other people will ger more better emotions and that's what I want to advice to some foreigners.

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Hi John! ^^

Every country has different codes or etiquettes that you must know before going there. Sometimes travel etiquettes are very different from place to place. So, you should know which things you are allowed to do and which not. No matter where you are going, no matter if you are traveling for the first time or you are an expert traveler. 

Your suggestion is actually a good choice. :)

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Not all the foreigners do that but sometimes, a few foreigners talk very loudly and the other people may get bad emotions.
>>Not all the foreigners do that but sometimes some of them talk very loudly and the other people may feel angry. 

So I think if the foreigners don't do that, the other people will ger more better emotions and that's what I want to advice to some foreigners.
>> So I think, if foreigners don't do that, people here will feel better towards them. That's what I want to advice to some foreigners.

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