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What advice would you give a foreigner visiting your country who would like to show good manners?

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You have to eat foods when people who older than you. And you have to say ¡°Thanks for eating.¡± before you eat meal and after you eat meal. Moreover you have to bow to people who older than you.

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Hi Yun! ^^

Every country has different codes or etiquettes that you must know before going there. Sometimes travel etiquettes are very different from place to place. So, you should know which things you are allowed to do and which not. No matter where you are going, no matter if you are traveling for the first time or you are an expert traveler. 

Your suggestion is actually a good choice. :)

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You have to eat foods when people who older than you. 
>> You have to eat food with people who are older than you. 

And you have to say ¡°Thanks for eating.¡± before you eat meal and after you eat meal. 
>> And you have to say ¡°Thanks for eating. before and after you eat the meal. 

Moreover you have to bow to people who older than you.
>> Moreover, you have to bow to people who older than you.

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