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I often visit tteokbokki restaurant

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spicy tteokbokki is my favorite food.
So, I visit tteokbokki restaurant 3times for a week.
It's make me to stress is relieved.
But,tteokbokki is very high calories. It is popular for 5th when never eat on diet.
Recently because of the pandemics, It is hard to go tteokbokki restaurant..
Another restaurant situration is all so same.
It's sad to me I can't eat even if i want.

I hope finish the pandemics so I can freely enjoy what i want to eat and where i want to go.

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Hi Hailey! 
Soon it will be over and everything will go back to normal, I hope :) 
Enjoy your vacation^^ 

spicy tteokbokki is my favorite food.
>>> Spicy tteokbokki is my favorite food.
So, I visit tteokbokki restaurant 3times for a week.
>>> So, I visit tteokbokki restaurant 3 times for a week.
It's make me to stress is relieved.
>>> It relieves my stress. 
But,tteokbokki is very high calories.
>>> But tteokbokki is very high in calories.
It is popular for 5th when never eat on diet.
>>> It's popular when you're not on a diet.
Recently because of the pandemics, It is hard to go tteokbokki restaurant.
>>> It's hard to go to a tteokbokki restaurant because of the pandemic. 
Another restaurant situration is all so same.
>>> Other restaurants have the same situation.
It's sad to me I can't eat even if i want.
>>> It's sad that I can't eat even if I want to.
I hope finish the pandemics so I can freely enjoy what i want to eat and where i want to go.
>>> I hope the pandemic ends soon so that I can freely enjoy what I want to eat and where I want to go.

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