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Q:HOMEWORK:
Kindly answer the following in essay form.
What are the advantages and disadvantage of having a siblings?

A:The advantage of having siblings is that you can make your younger brother feel uncomfortable.But the downside is that if my brother and I fight, we'll get in trouble.

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Hi Daniel! ^^

The biggest advantage of having a sibling is that you do not feel lonely because in young age you have always company in the form of brother or sister with who you can play, fight and do many things and when you grow old then also your brother or sister will be there with you during happy times as well as during troubled times.


The biggest disadvantage of having a sibling is that there will always be comparisons between the two you by your parents as well as society which in a way is wrong as every individual is different and if you had no brother or sister then there will no such comparisons as majority of times such comparisons can do more harm than good.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

The advantage of having siblings is that you can make your younger brother feel uncomfortable.
>> CORRECT

But the downside is that if my brother and I fight, we'll get in trouble.
>>But the downside is that, if my brother and I fight, we'll get in trouble.

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