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English writing interview expected question\'s answer

작성자: 이*현
2021-08-13 311

회원님의 영작문

1.
When I usually lost the direction, I ask to near person.
Therefore, I ask to nearest staff first.
If I find a market, I will entry it and ask direction.
If I’m alone this place, I will look for the sign or map of direction.
It is usually near entrée, so I return the gate which I went.
In other ways, I can search the map of airport through smart phone or I can call to help to airport office.
If I lost direction in anywhere, I use the ways, so I can solve the problem calmly.

2.
Usually, I’m slow to noise in home. If I can’t endure that, It is very serious.
First, I find the room of cause. If the noise’s running time is very short, I don’t think it is not important problem.
Second, after I found out the reason, I will call police office.
If the noise is constantly made, I can go to the room and I tell them directly like below.
“Your room is very loudly. Quite more please.”
If I can’t find out the room, I will send message to the building owner.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello there again Kang Hyeon!

These are two very interesting questions. I also find your answers interesting and substantial.

For the first question, When you are lost in the airport, the air port staff or personnel may help you the best. You are right about this. If you get lost in the market, find a local in that place and assess if that person is honest. It may be good for you to ask a second person to confirm if person one is right. It is paramount to be calm and vigilant all the time.

Meanwhile, when the foreigner next door is noisy, first, consult your land lord or building owner. This is the standard operating procedure when you live in an apartment. If the noise becomes unbearable, then you can call the police.

Congratulations to your continuous hard work in trying to answer these questions to the best that you can. Stay inspired and keep pushing. I am here to help. ^^

-T. Donna =)

1. What will you do when you get lost at the airport?
When I usually lost the direction, I ask to near person.
>> Usually, when I get lost with direction, I ask a nearby person.

Therefore, I ask to nearest staff first.
>> Therefore, I will ask the nearest staff first.

If I find a market, I will entry it and ask direction.
>> If I find a market, I will enter it and ask for direction.

If I’m alone this place, I will look for the sign or map of direction.
>> Correct!

It is usually near entrance, so I return the gate which I went.
>>It is usually near the entrance, so I return to the gate which I came from.

In other ways, I can search the map of airport through smart phone or I can call to help to airport office.
>> One more way is to search the map of the airport through a smart phone or I can call for help to the airport office.

If I lost direction in anywhere, I use the ways, so I can solve the problem calmly.
>> If I lost direction anywhere, I will use these ways so I can solve the problem calmly.

2. What will you do when the foreigner next door is noisy?
Usually, I’m slow to noise in home. If I can’t endure that, It is very serious.
>> Usually, I only hear limited noise at home. If I can’t endure that, It is very serious.

First, I find the room of cause. If the noise’s running time is very short, I don’t think it is not important problem.
>> First, I  will find the room of the cause of the noise. If the noise’s running time is very short, I don’t think it is not an important problem.

Second, after I found out the reason, I will call police office.
>> Second, after I found out the reason, I will call the police office.

If the noise is constantly made, I can go to the room and I tell them directly like below. “Your room is very loudly. Quite more please.”
>> If the noise is constantly made, I can go to the room and I tell them directly, " Your room is very loud. Please be more quiet.”

If I can’t find out the room, I will send message to the building owner.
>> If I can’t find out the room, I will send a message to the building owner.
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