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Would you rather take a trip to a new country or get a new TV?

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Of course, I'd rather go on a trip to a new country. I am a penchant for travelling different countries. My husband and I are planning to travel Laos or Singapore. If COVID 19 is over in December or January, we will go to Laos. If COVID 19 is over in summer, we will travel Singapore.
Nobody knows when Corona Pandemic is terminated yet. So we are considering buying a new TV. We bought the existing TV about 6 years ago and it has worked well until now. But my husband thinks we need a bigger one. I think there are a lot of restricts in our life because of Corona Pandemic and he wants to change something he can do.

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Hi Joshua, thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin

Of course, I'd rather go on a trip to a new country.
>>Of course, I'd rather go on a trip to a new country. 
 I am a penchant for travelling different countries.
>> I am a penchant for travelling different countries. 
My husband and I are planning to travel Laos or Singapore. 
>>My husband and I are planning to travel Laos or Singapore. 
If COVID 19 is over in December or January, we will go to Laos. 
>>If COVID 19 is over in December or January, we will go to Laos. 
If COVID 19 is over in summer, we will travel Singapore.
>>Or if COVID 19 is over in summer, we will travel Singapore.
Nobody knows when Corona Pandemic is terminated yet. 
>>Nobody knows when will the Corona Pandemic end. 
So we are considering buying a new TV. 
>>So we are just considering buying a new TV. 
We bought the existing TV about 6 years ago and it has worked well until now. 
>>We bought our TV about 6 years ago and it's still working well until now. 
But my husband thinks we need a bigger one. 
>>But my husband thinks that we need a bigger one. 
I think there are a lot of restricts in our life because of Corona Pandemic and he wants to change something he can do.
>>I think there are lots of restrictions in our lives because of the Corona Pandemic and he wants to think about the things he can still do in this situation. 
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