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What is your philosophy in life? - interview answer

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My philosophy in life is ¡°experience is the best teacher.¡±
I¡¯ve always believed that I can learn from all experience.
I strongly believe success or fail is not important, just try it.
Success is achieved by more and more many challenges.

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Hello there again Kang Hyeon!

As you have requested, I have added a few more sentences to make this answer longer and to have a conclusion as well. I think that this was one of the questions we answered in class yesterday. Study the suggestions carefully and read the conclusion well.

Thank you for your dedication to your work always. Well done!

See you again soon!

-T. Donna =)

My philosophy in life is ¡°experience is the best teacher.¡±
>> Correct!
Or: 
My philosophy in life is, ¡°Experience is the best teacher.¡±.

I¡¯ve always believed that I can learn from all experience.
>> I¡¯ve always believed that I can learn from all experiences.

I strongly believe success or fail is not important, just try it.
>> I strongly believe success or failure are not important, we just need to try.

Success is achieved by more and more many challenges.
>> Success is achieved by facing and surviving more and more challenges.

The more experiences we gain,  we can correct ourselves and thus save valuable time and resources. This teaches us how to live. Hence, experience develops our critical thinking by being wiser with the moves we make in the future by the mistakes we make today.


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>> Please add more sentences. I think it is too short.

* Please recommend conclusion sentence.
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