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Which is better: solving stress or avoiding stress?

--> If I have to choose one of them, I prefer solving stress. I think avoiding stress is not the answer to decrease the stress.
When I get some stress, I want to know the reason why I got the stress. And then I try to solve the stress to relieve myself.

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Hello there Bo Im!

I have not thought of this before. However, I think that you are actually absolutely right because in many cases, stress just comes out of nowhere and we must be able to determine a way to solve it and not to avoid it.

As a leader yourself, I think that you have met these kinds of challenges along the way and were able to see the light at the end of the tunnel.

Thank you for your answer. See you later in class for more meaningful discussions.

-T. Donna =)


If I have to choose one of them, I prefer solving stress. 
>> Correct!

I think avoiding stress is not the answer to decrease the stress.
>> Correct!

When I get some stress, I want to know the reason why I got the stress. 
>> Correct!

And then I try to solve the stress to relieve myself.
>> Correct!
Or: And then, I try to solve the stress to relieve myself.
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