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The most difficult class I have taken so far

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2021-08-16 141

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The most difficult class I have taken was the ‘Military Journal Class’ of the last semester. It was a 90 minute English-only class with a professor from the Annapolis. It was my first time to use English for that long time, which took a lot of energy to took part in the class. I should not lose my concentration during the class. As you can know with its name, the topics of the class was mainly about military issues. Military issues were really tricky because information about the military was usually treated secretly and it belonged to a quite ‘minor’ part of the political issues, which means people except the experts don’t have a lot interest about the things. These two characteristics of the military issues made me read many military papers written in English every week for the class. Also, during the class, I had a really hard time constructing our my logic in the sentences of English. I think it’s quite similar to the class of us especially when we treat the political issues.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Su Jin! I think one solution is to keep reading, it would continuously help you improve your sentence construction. Great work on this composition, there are a few grammar slips, nevertheless, I think that we will be able to fix that. Also, please take note of the corrections in each sentence.

- Teacher Ivy :)

 

The most difficult class I have taken was the ‘Military Journal Class’ of the last semester.

>> The most difficult class I have taken was the ‘Military Journal Class’ last semester.

It was a 90 minute English-only class with a professor from the Annapolis.

>> It was a 90 minute English-only class with a professor from Annapolis.

It was my first time to use English for that long time, which took a lot of energy to took part in the class.

>> It was my first time to use English after a long time, which took a lot of energy to take part in the class.

I should not lose my concentration during the class.

>> Correct

As you can know with its name, the topics of the class was mainly about military issues.

>> As you know, given its name, the topics of the class was mainly about military issues.

Military issues were really tricky because information about the military was usually treated secretly and it belonged to a quite ‘minor’ part of the political issues, which means people except the experts don’t have a lot interest about the things.

>> Correct

These two characteristics of the military issues made me read many military papers written in English every week for the class.

>> Correct

Also, during the class, I had a really hard time constructing our my logic in the sentences of English.

>> Also, during the class, I had a really hard time constructing my logic in English.

I think it’s quite similar to the class of us especially when we treat the political issues.

>> I think it’s quite similar to the class when we treat the political issues.

 

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