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I enjoyed to learn an english.
When I understood english on english movie and english song without subtitle, I feel exciting and touching.
and I think it is a cool who speak english well.
So, I want to learn english and speaks like negative.
But, It's to hard to me, I learned english since 7 years old
but, my english grade is still elements students.
English is the most interesting and enjoying to me,
but it is difficult and stressful.
Please give me advice to improve my English.

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Hi again Hailey! 
There is no shortcut when learning a language! 
Time and effort will improve your skills :) 

I enjoyed to learn an english.
>>> I enjoy learning English. 
When I understood english on english movie and english song without subtitle, I feel exciting and touching.
>>> It is exciting and touching to understand English without subtitles in English movies or English songs.
and I think it is a cool who speak english well.
>>> And I think people who are good at English are cool.
So, I want to learn english and speaks like negative.
>>> So I want to learn English and speak native. 
But, It's to hard to me, I learned english since 7 years old
but, my english grade is still elements students.
>>> However, I have learned English since I was 7 years old, but my English level is still elementary. 
English is the most interesting and enjoying to me, but it is difficult and stressful.
>>> English is the most fun and enjoyable, but it is difficult and stressful for me.
Please give me advice to improve my English.
>>> Please give me some advice to improve my English.

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