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I think that your homework questions are very good and worth talking about.
So how about we also talk about homework questions in class?
For example, homework question of yesterday "What changes do you want to happen in your current government?"

Of course I am interested in diverse topics at issue.

and I 'd like to ask for onething.
I am thankful if you write down that you used important words or sentences in class. I want to remind of key words.
Thanks.

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Good day Ms. Lily! Thank you for telling me your thought concerning your class. I would definitely consider that. Have a great day.
~Aki :)
I think that your homework questions are very good and worth talking about.
>>> I think the homework questions you usually give were good and worth talking about
So how about we also talk about homework questions in class?
>>> So, why don't we also talk about the homework questions in the class?
For example, homework question of yesterday "What changes do you want to happen in your current government?"

>>> For example; the homework question yesterday was, "What changes do you want to happen in your current government"?
Of course I am interested in diverse topics at issue.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Of course, I am interested in current issues.
and I 'd like to ask for onething.
>>> And I'd like to ask for one more thing.
I am thankful if you write down that you used important words or sentences in class. I want to remind of key words.
>>> I would be thankful if you would write down the important words or sentences you used in the class. I want to be reminded of some key words.

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