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I like Tasha Tudor's paintings rather than specific one artwork.
She is famous as illustraitor and a fairy tale writer in the world.
Her paintings always have people hanging out with nature and spending happy time with animals.
She is already dead, but she is still loved by her many fairy tale illustrations and warm drawings.
The first time that I saw her painting was when my mother gave me her fairy tale book as a present.
when I saw her drawing, I feel cozy and happy like the people and animals in her paintings.
She is also famous for her beautiful garden.
She loved nature friendly life so, she live in countryside and had a large garden.
I think she could paint beautiful paintings because she loved nature and animals
I want to be a illustraitor even as a grandmother like her!(*'v'*)

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Hello Jessica! Thank you so much for telling me about Tasha Tudor. She sounds like a lovely person and an amazing illustrator :) 
I think that you'll be a wonderful illustrator like her, your illustrations are beautiful! :D 
See you in class! 
-T. Angelica 

I like Tasha Tudor's paintings rather than specific one artwork.

>>I like Tasha Tudor's paintings rather than one specific artwork. 
She is famous as illustraitor and a fairy tale writer in the world.
>>She is a world-famous illustrator and fairy tale writer. 
Her paintings always have people hanging out with nature and spending happy time with animals.
>>
Her paintings always have people happily hanging out with nature and spending time with animals.
She is already dead, but she is still loved by her many fairy tale illustrations and warm drawings.
>>CORRECT.
The first time that I saw her painting was when my mother gave me her fairy tale book as a present.
>>CORRECT. 
>>OR: The first time I saw her painting was when my mother gifted me her fairy tale book. 
when I saw her drawing, I feel cozy and happy like the people and animals in her paintings.
>>When I saw her drawing, I felt cozy and happy like the people and animals in her paintings.  
She is also famous for her beautiful garden.
>>CORRECT. 
She loved nature friendly life so, she live in countryside and had a large garden.
>>She loved nature, so she lived in the countryside and had a large garden. 
I think she could paint beautiful paintings because she loved nature and animals
>>CORRECT. 
I want to be a illustraitor even as a grandmother like her!(*'v'*)
>>CORRECT. 
>>OR: I want to be an illustrator until I grow old like her. 

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