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Is there a kind of TV show that you will never watch?

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I don't like watching 'Teuroteu' show.
Recently in korea, it is growing in popular.
'Teuroteu' is the genre of korea music.
In the past, It was the songs old people used to sing. But now, young people sing the songs.
'Teuroteu'show is the contest program. They choose the best peson.
old people likes the program. but I don't like that.

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Good day, Ava!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
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I don't like watching 'Teuroteu' show.
>> CORRECT!
Recently in korea, it is growing in popular.
>> Recently in Korea, it is becoming popular.
'Teuroteu' is the genre of korea music.
>> 'Teuroteu' is a Korean genre of music.
In the past, It was the songs old people used to sing. 
>> In the past, the songs were what old people used to sing. 
But now, young people sing the songs.
>> CORRECT!
'Teuroteu'show is the contest program. 
>> 'Teuroteu' show is a kind of contest program. 
They choose the best peson.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> They choose the best singer.
old people likes the program. 
>> Old people like that program, but I don't.
but I don't like that.
>> Old people like that program, but I don't.

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