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If I want to get my own house, it will require a big amount of money because housing price keep rising. Even it¡¯s difficult to rent small apartment for those who depends on their salary recently. Hence, I might apply for a loan from the bank.

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Hello Judy!

This is one of the reasons why more and more people in your country become less interested in having more children because instead of spending for their kids, they would rather pay their apartment or house. This is a sad scenario because someday, there will be so many apartments where very few or no people live.

Well, I hope that you can have a great career enough to pay for your home someday.

Thank you for your answer. I shall see you on Friday then.

-T. Donna =)

If I want to get my own house, it will require a big amount of money because housing price keep rising. 
>> If I want to get my own house, it will require a big amount of money because housing price keeps rising. 

Even it¡¯s difficult to rent small apartment for those who depends on their salary recently. 
>> It¡¯s even difficult to rent a small apartment for those who depend on their salary recently. 

Hence, I might apply for a loan from the bank.
>> Correct!
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