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What exotic foods do you want to try and why?

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The exotic food i want to try is tacos.
It looks delicious.

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Hi Emma! ^^

When we travel to different places, we can encounter different kinds of food. Some can also be exotic. It's sometimes nice to try new things. You can gain more experience through this. You choice is really nice by the way. 

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The exotic food i want to try is tacos.
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It looks delicious.
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