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Why do you think body language is important?

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I don't think that a body langauge is not that efficient but I think a body langauge is quite important to people.
First, if we went to the other country but we don't know the other country's language, than, we can use a body langauge.
Second, if we shouldn't speak something to other people but I have to tell something to other people, than, we can use it.
But there is a disadventage of a body language.
We might not understand a body language so it can cause a problem.
But we can use a body language in many way so I think a body language is quite important to people.

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Hi John! ^^

The importance of body language is that it assists us in understanding and decoding what the person is saying. Body language also helps interpret other peoples' moods and emotions. Apart from this, it enhances our conscious understanding of people's reactions to what we say and how we say it.

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I don't think that a body langauge is not that efficient but I think a body langauge is quite important to people.
>> I don't think that a body language is that efficient but I think it  is quite important to people.

First, if we went to the other country but we don't know the other country's language, than, we can use a body langauge.
>> First, if we went to the other country but we don't know the other country's language, than, we can use a body language.

Second, if we shouldn't speak something to other people but I have to tell something to other people, than, we can use it.
>> Second, if we can't say something to other people but I have to express it, I can use that. 

But there is a disadventage of a body language.
>> There are still some disadvantages to this. 

We might not understand a body language so it can cause a problem.
>> We might not interpret body language correctly which can eventually cause a problem. 

But we can use a body language in many way so I think a body language is quite important to people.
>> BUt we can still use body language in many ways so I think it is still important. 

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