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What exotic foods do you want to try and why?

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Dear Elise,


Yesterday I said that I like rice noodles.
Vietnamese food is popular in Korea.
And I was looking for Philipino foods.
And I found Pansit you mentioned.
It looks like Japchae, Korean food and I love Japchae.
And I'd like to try to eat Pansit too.
I'm also interested in sinigang.
I like soup but not sour.
About Korean foods, we don't use sour taste for soup.
And I want to have it.

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Hi Soo Mi! ^^

When we travel to different places, we can encounter different kinds of food. Some can also be exotic. It's sometimes nice to try new things. You can gain more experience through this. You choice is really nice by the way. 

PS: I love sinigang. It's my favorite dish! You should try it. You will really like it :) 

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Yesterday I said that I like rice noodles.
>> 
Yesterday, I said that I like rice noodles.

Vietnamese food is popular in Korea.
>> CORRECT

And I was looking for Philipino foods.
>> I am also looking for Filipino foods. 

And I found Pansit you mentioned.
>> You have mentioned "Pansit" to me. 

It looks like Japchae, Korean food and I love Japchae.
>> It looks like Japchae, a Korean food, and I love Japchae.

And I'd like to try to eat Pansit too.
>> 
I'd like to try Pansit too.

I'm also interested in sinigang.
>> I'm also interested in "Sinigang".

I like soup but not sour.
>> I like soup but not the sour taste. 

About Korean foods, we don't use sour taste for soup.
>> Korean foods are not usually sour. 

And I want to have it.
>> Still, I want to try it. 
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