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How does fashion affect people¡¯s lives

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I think fashion reflects the person's individuality.
According to the colors or types of clothes, we can express our individuality.
There are many trends of fashion every year or every seasons.
Some people follows the fashion trends unconditionally.
However, making their own styles is important to strength the self-confidence.

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Good Morning, Tia. Thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin 

I think fashion reflects the person's individuality.
>>I think fashion reflects a person's character. 
According to the colors or types of clothes, we can express our individuality.
>>Our choice of colors can determine our personalities. 
There are many trends of fashion every year or every seasons.
>>Fashion trends are evolving constantly for changing times
Some people follows the fashion trends unconditionally.
>> Some people follow the latest fashion trends all the time . 
However, making their own styles is important to strength the self-confidence.
>>However, having your own style that you're comfortable with is important in gaining self-confidence. 

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