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How do you keep a good balance between your career, work, and family?

-> First of all, I keep my work hours thoroughly. While working at a company, it is important to focus on doing 100% well at the company. That's because I can finish my work without going past work hours. And since our company has a flexible working system, starting at 8 a.m., rather than 9 a.m., and finishing at 5 a.m. helps me spend more time with my family.

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Hello Bo Im!

Balance is what everybody aims for in life yet only a few can achieve it because of forces that might affect the conditions of work, family, among others. I think that even if it seems difficult for you to as a leading woman at work, you try your best to attend to your family's needs in as much as you can.

So, hang tough and stay head strong to anything. See you!

-T. Donna =)

First of all, I keep my work hours thoroughly. 
>> Correct!

While working at a company, it is important to focus on doing 100% well at the company. 
>> Correct!
Or: 
While working at a company, it is important to focus on doing 100% well in the work place.. 

That's because I can finish my work without going past work hours. 
>> Correct!

And since our company has a flexible working system, starting at 8 a.m., rather than 9 a.m., and finishing at 5 a.m. helps me spend more time with my family.
>>  And since our company has a flexible working system starting from 8 a.m. rather than 9 a.m., and finishing at 5 p.m., it helps me spend more time with my family.
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