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In your opinion, what are the pros and cons of studying at home?

작성자: 김*수
2021-08-20 396

회원님의 영작문

Related with time management, students could have different feelings about studying at home.
The advantage of studying at home is students can manage their time well. Because they don’t go to school, they could have more time to do other things instead of commuting. Therefore, students could learn how to manage their time and plan their schedules more properly when they are staying at home. In this point, studying at home could help self-directed students.
The disadvantage of studying at home is students can waste their time. In contrast of students who can set their plans, they tend to have no wills to live diligent. These people feel hard to plan their schedules and to live deliberately. They need knowledge for time management, and they have to be checked their plans by teachers until they are accustomed with planning.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good evening, Ria!
^^,)
This is a very good composition. Thank you for finding time to accomplish your homework.
I can see that you tried you best to cite the advantage and disadvantage of studying at home.
You did a good job here! I truly appreciate your effort.

I hope you'll have a safe weekend. Good night!

__T. Mayleen :)


Related with time management, students could have different feelings about studying at home.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Related with time management, students could have different reactions about studying at home.
The advantage of studying at home is students can manage their time well. 
>>> CORRECT
Because they don’t go to school, they could have more time to do other things instead of commuting. 
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: They don’t go to school, thus, they have more time to do other things instead of commuting. 
Therefore, students could learn how to manage their time and plan their schedules more properly when they are staying at home. 
>>> CORRECT
In this point, studying at home could help self-directed students.
>>> At this point, studying at home could help, self-directed students.
The disadvantage of studying at home is students can waste their time. 
>>> CORRECT
In contrast of students who can set their plans, they tend to have no wills to live diligent. 
>>> In contrast to students who can set their plans, some seem to have no will to live diligently. 
These people feel hard to plan their schedules and to live deliberately. 
>>> These students find it hard to plan their schedule and to live zealously.
They need knowledge for time management, and they have to be checked their plans by teachers until they are accustomed with planning.
>>> They need to learn time management and their teachers have to check their plans until they are accustomed to planning things independently.
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