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If you moved to another country, what things would you miss about where you live now? Which ones would you be glad to get away from?

I would like to experience about living another country.
I can live there for years, but I don't like to live another city for long time.
Firstly, I am glad to experience to the new circumstances.
But, I definitely miss my county about food, friends and family. Also I miss to speak in Korean.
I will feel homesick everyday.

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Hi Monica! ^^

Everything changes once you take off and start somewhere new. When you first land, it¡¯s normal to feel anxious, scared, maybe even a little sick to your stomach, and excited. Then you blink and months fly by as your feet get firmly planted in your new surroundings. Every day your life starts slowly piecing itself together like the stills of a stop-motion movie. 

On the other hand, there are things that we find annoying about our hometown. Everything is not perfect. It would still have flaws and needs changes. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.


I would like to experience about living another country.

>> I would like to experience what life is like living in another country.


I can live there for years, but I don't like to live another city for long time.

>> I can live there for years, but I don't want to live in another city for a long time.


Firstly, I am glad to experience to the new circumstances.

>> Firstly, I will be glad to experience new circumstances.


But, I definitely miss my county about food, friends and family. Also I miss to speak in Korean.

>> I would definitely miss speaking in Korean, my family and my friends, and the food in my country.


I will feel homesick everyday.

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