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작성자: 정*희
2021-08-23 324

회원님의 영작문

In fact, online classes were hard to imagine before the corona virus.
I have already studied with recorded video lectures, but meeting teachers and students in real time with online class was something that I could think of when I was in elementary school, at a Science imagination drawing contest.
According to my experience of online classes for almost two years, there was no big inconvenience.
Due to the characteristics of my major in design, I was able to get feedback on what I had done in class rather than drawing that time, and share the process of other friends' works, so it was comfortable to see other people\'s works well.
However, compared to face-to-face class, the immersion level in the class was different.
In theory class, most professors take notes on the screen, but sometimes older professors take notes on the actual whiteboard and show us to the camera, but I can't see them very well...
I hope the corona virus ends as soon as possible.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Jessica, 
Thanks for sharing your thoughts regarding your experience with online classes :) Online classes seem like something we could have only imagined so it's amazing that we're able to do this now. Good job on your homework! 
-T. Angelica
In fact, online classes were hard to imagine before the corona virus.
>>Online class were hard to imagine before the coronavirus
I have already studied with recorded video lectures, but meeting teachers and students in real time with online class was something that I could think of when I was in elementary school, at a Science imagination drawing contest.
>>I have already studied with recorded lecture videos but meeting teachers and students online in real-time was something that I could have only imagined when I was in elementary school at a Science imagination drawing contest. 
According to my experience of online classes for almost two years, there was no big inconvenience.
>>CORRECT :) 
OR >> In my experience of taking online classes for almost two years, there was no significant inconvenience. 
Due to the characteristics of my major in design, I was able to get feedback on what I had done in class rather than drawing that time, and share the process of other friends' works, so it was comfortable to see other people\'s works well.
>>Due to the characteristics of my major in design, I was able to get feedback on what I had done in class rather than drawing that time. I was also able to share in the process of my friends' works, so it was comfortable to see other people's works as well.
However, compared to face-to-face class, the immersion level in the class was different.
>>CORRECT :) 
In theory class, most professors take notes on the screen, but sometimes older professors take notes on the actual whiteboard and show us to the camera, but I can't see them very well...
>>Most professors take notes on the screen in theory class, but some older professors take notes on the actual whiteboard which made it hard for me to see them sometimes. 
I hope the corona virus ends as soon as possible.
>>CORRECT (coronavirus is one word) 
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