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또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

I don\'t know if it\'s right to do homework like this ^^;;

작성자: 김*랑
2021-08-23 187

회원님의 영작문





First of all, I don't know how to write it because it's my first time, but I'll write it down as I think about it~^^

First, Falling is the meaning of "going down fast from a high place to a low place", for example, "An apple is falling from a tree!" can be used as Fall is a verb form, and if ~ing is added to Fall, it becomes the present continuous tense and becomes "the form in progress now". That's why the previous example was "is falling".

Failing is a means of a state in which the purpose has not been achieved or a weakness. For example, "I know my failings, so I'm trying to overcome them". Failing has many meanings, so I think it can be interpreted differently depending on the situation!

P.S. Isn't the second picture so sad...? Ah...I really regret seeing that...He only need to dig it one more time...:(

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello there, Maria! ^_^)

Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework.
You did a very good job in defining the given words and you also provided examples.
I really appreciate that.
If you have questions, we'll talk about them tomorrow, okay?
Have a good night!

__T. Mayleen :)


First of all, I don't know how to write it because it's my first time, but I'll write it down as I think about it~^^
>>> First of all, I don't know how to begin/start because it's my first time, but I'll write it down as I think about it~^^

First, Falling is the meaning of "going down fast from a high place to a low place", for example, "An apple is falling from a tree!" can be used as Fall is a verb form, and if ~ing is added to Fall, it becomes the present continuous tense and becomes "the form in progress now".
>>> First, falling means going down fast from a high place. For example, "An apple is falling from a tree!" By adding -ing to the verb fall, its tense becomes present continuous - - a tense to describe events that are happening right now or something that may or will happen later on.
That's why the previous example was "is falling".
>>> That's why the previous example/sentence has '

Failing is a means of a state in which the purpose has not been achieved or a weakness.
>>> Failing is an act or state in which the purpose has not been achieved or a weakness.
For example, "I know my failings, so I'm trying to overcome them".
>>> CORRECT
Failing has many meanings, so I think it can be interpreted differently depending on the situation!
>>> CORRECT

P.S. Isn't the second picture so sad...? Ah...I really regret seeing that...
>>> CORRECT
He only need to dig it one more time...:(
>>> He only needs to dig it one more time.
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