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Are you good at apologizing?

=>I think that I am relatively straightforward. So I tend to apologize well when I have to.
But strangely, apologizing to my husband is not easy.^^;;

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Hello there Bo Im!

Apologizing actually means that you are humbling yourself enough to keep a good relationship with the people around you. Sometimes regardless if you are right or wrong, you may say sorry and eat your pride. However, there are times that pride is hard to swallow- I think this is the case with your husband.

Nonetheless, apologizing is one humane way of dealing with relationships.

See you later!

-T. Donna =)

I think that I am relatively straightforward. 
>> Correct!

So I tend to apologize well when I have to.
>> Correct!

But strangely, apologizing to my husband is not easy.^^;;
>> Correct!
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