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Is it bad to believe in superstitions? Should we keep believing in superstition?

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I think that there are reasons for making superstition. In the past. adults wanted to stop something they don't want, for example, if someone had their nails cut off, It was probably hard to find all pieces of cut nails. Because there wasn't good lamp. Somebody wanted to stop cutting nails at night for keeping clean home. So, he or she made the superstition. It isn't matter not to follow the superstition, but if we do, we feel uncomfortable. My opinion is that it is better to keep the superstition which doesn't give damage to us.

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Hello Hwanny! 
Thank you for submitting your homework ^_^ Your explanation for the superstition about cutting nails at night is very interesting and it makes a lot of sense. I also agree that it's okay to keep superstitions that don't bring any damage to us. Thank you so much for sharing with me your opinion on superstitions.
See you in class! 
Regards, 
T. Angelica 
I think that there are reasons for making superstition. 
>>I think that there are reasons for making superstitions. 
In the past. adults wanted to stop something they don't want, for example, if someone had their nails cut off, It was probably hard to find all pieces of cut nails. Because there wasn't good lamp. 
>> In the past, adults probably wanted to stop behavior they didn't like. For example, if someone had cut their nails it would have been hard to find all the pieces of the cut nails as there wasn't a good lamp. 
Somebody wanted to stop cutting nails at night for keeping clean home. So, he or she made the superstition. 
>>They wanted to stop cutting nails at night to keep the home clean so he or she made that superstition. 
It isn't matter not to follow the superstition, but if we do, we feel uncomfortable. 
>> It doesn't matter if we follow superstitions or not, but if we feel uncomfortable then in my opinion, it is better to keep following the superstition that isn't damaging to us. 
My opinion is that it is better to keep the superstition which doesn't give damage to us.
>>In my opinion, it is better to follow the superstitions that aren't harmful or damaging to us. 
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