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What\'s your favorite meal to eat on a cold, rainy day? Why?

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When It's rainy weather, I want to eat Korean traditional food " Jeon"
Jeon looks like pancake or pizza.
There are many kind of Jeon and specially I like kimchi jeon and pajeon (green-onion Jeon) .
Kimchi Jeon is slightly spicy and savory.
Green-onion Jeon is usually included seafood like shrimp and clam.
The combination of green onions and seafood is the best.
At this time, it's the best meal to eat it with makgeolli- Korean traditional wine.
It rained yesterday. So I made kimchi jeon last night to eat with my family.
Kimchi jeon is easy to make if you have kimchi.
I think Korean jeon has to become a gloval food.
I want to spread Korean jeon to the world.

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It's me again! 
Wow, I love this snack! 
I have not eaten it for a while since the pandemic started :( 
I hope to learn how to make this. 

When It's rainy weather, I want to eat Korean traditional food " Jeon"
Jeon looks like pancake or pizza.
>>> On a rainy day, I want to eat Korean traditional food 'Jeon'.
There are many kind of Jeon and specially I like kimchi jeon and pajeon (green-onion Jeon) .
>>> There are many kinds of jeon, especially kimchi jeon and scallion pancake.
Kimchi Jeon is slightly spicy and savory.
>>> CORRECT! 
Green-onion Jeon is usually included seafood like shrimp and clam.
>>> Green onion jeon usually has seafood such as shrimp and shellfish.
The combination of green onions and seafood is the best.
>>> CORRECT! 
OR: The harmony between green onions and seafood is the best.
At this time, it's the best meal to eat it with makgeolli- Korean traditional wine.
>>> CORRECT! 
OR: It's the best meal if you eat it with makgeolli.
It rained yesterday. So I made kimchi jeon last night to eat with my family.
>>> It rained yesterday, so I made kimchi pancakes with my family last night.
Kimchi jeon is easy to make if you have kimchi.
>>> CORRECT!
I think Korean jeon has to become a gloval food.
>>> I think Korean pancakes has become a global food. 
I want to spread Korean jeon to the world.
>>> CORRECT! 
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