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Will you apologize even when you are not wrong for the sake of keeping a good relationship?

-> Yes, I will. Even if I feel I did nothing wrong, it can be a problem that the other person has become angry.
From the other person's point of view, I think I can apologize if I understand the situation.

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Hello Bo Im!

As we grow older, being correct matters less. Being kind through humility is the choice we make because we want to keep our peace. There are rewards in lowering pride and choosing humility at home, work, and the world out there.

See you in a few minutes.

-T. Donna =)

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es, I will. Even if I feel I did nothing wrong, it can be a problem that the other person has become angry.
>> Correct!

From the other person's point of view, I think I can apologize if I understand the situation.
>> Correct!
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