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What are some ways to overcome being nervous about meeting new people?

작성자: 김*정
2021-08-26 297

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My daughter transferred to another school and new school day started this Monday. She must have been nervous when she met new friends and teachers. When she grumbled about her jittering and appealed her stomachache, I told her that her feeling was natural, not weird. Take a breath and have self-confidence. Just concentrate on the conversation with smile. You don’t need to feel any pressure that you have to do something. Say or do when you are ready, when you want to.
I think various reasons make people nervous. It may be an excessive expectation or an evident aim. It may due to inherent character. Whatever the reason, just take it easy and try to enjoy the atmosphere. Anxiety will be wear off soon.
(FYI) In my daughter’s case, checking herself in front of the mirror was one of her way to have self-confidence. Right. Nice and fancy outfit gives power.

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Excellent, Sojung! You were able to give me a vivid and detailed explanation about this situation. Keep up the good work!-Faith-
My daughter transferred to another school and new school day started this Monday. 
>> My daughter transferred to another school and their classes started last Monday. 
She must have been nervous when she met new friends and teachers. 
>> She must have been nervous when she met her new friends and teachers. 
When she grumbled about her jittering and appealed her stomachache, I told her that her feeling was natural, not weird. 
>> When she grumbled about her jitters and appealed to me her stomachache, I told her that her feeling was natural, not weird. 
Take a breath and have self-confidence. 
>> CORRECT
Just concentrate on the conversation with smile. 
>> Just concentrate on the conversation with a smile. 
You don’t need to feel any pressure that you have to do something. 
>> CORRECT
OR You are not obliged to do something.
Say or do when you are ready, when you want to.
>> Say or do something when you are ready and when you want to.
I think various reasons make people nervous.
>> CORRECT
OR I believe the are numerous causes why people get nervous.
It may be an excessive expectation or an evident aim. 
>> CORRECT
It may due to inherent character. 
>> It may be due to inherent character. 
Whatever the reason, just take it easy and try to enjoy the atmosphere. 
>> Whatever the reason is, just take it easy and try to enjoy the atmosphere. 
Anxiety will be wear off soon.
>> Anxiety will wear off soon.
(FYI) In my daughter’s case, checking herself in front of the mirror was one of her way to have self-confidence. 
>> (FYI) In my daughter’s case, checking herself in front of the mirror was one of her ways to have self-confidence. 
Right. Nice and fancy outfit gives power.
>> Right. Nice and fancy outfits give power.
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