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Everyone in the family looks great, right?

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회원님의 영작문





Our family is a total 7 people. Mom, Dad, Me, Brother, Grandma, Grandpa, Aunt. My mom is good at her body, she looks great in any outfit, and she's so pretty (so I feel a bit envious..). My dad is very kind to me, and he does his best in everything he does. My younger brother is very cute, he has a pretty dimple when he smiles, and he listens to me well. Grandma cooks well, and Grandpa is very good at calligraphy. My aunt is a professor for a science and she is very smart!! I'm... always full of energy, and I think I treasure my friendship with my friends.

P.S. During our class, I couldn't tell the my favorite actor name, so I looked up the actor and uploaded it with a picture. First person's name is Robert Downey Jr, and second person's name is Kim Soo-hyun.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Maria!
(^___^)

I am glad you're able to answer your homework.
This is a good composition and I appreciate your effort. However, I have made some modifications.
If you have questions, let's answer them on Monday. Have a good weekend!

__T. Mayleen :)


Our family is a total 7 people. Mom, Dad, Me, Brother, Grandma, Grandpa, Aunt.
>>> My family has a total of 7 members; mom, dad, my brother, grandma, grandpa, aunt and me.
My mom is good at her body, she looks great in any outfit, and she's so pretty (so I feel a bit envious..).
>>> My mom takes care of her brother and she looks great in any outfit. She's also very pretty that's why I am a bit envious.
My dad is very kind to me, and he does his best in everything he does.
>>> My dad is very kind to me and he gives his best in everything he does.
My younger brother is very cute, he has a pretty dimple when he smiles, and he listens to me well.
>>> My younger brother is very cute. His pretty dimple appears when he smiles and he listens to me well.
Grandma cooks well, and Grandpa is very good at calligraphy.
>>> Grandma cooks well and grandpa is very good at calligraphy.
My aunt is a professor for a science and she is very smart!!
>>> My aunt is a Science professor and she is very smart!!
I'm... always full of energy, and I think I treasure my friendship with my friends.
>>> I'm always full of energy and I know how to treasure friendship.

P.S. During our class, I couldn't tell the my favorite actor name, so I looked up the actor and uploaded it with a picture.
>>> P.S. During our class, I couldn't tell the my favorite actor's name, so I  looked it up and uploaded a picture of him.
First person's name is Robert Downey Jr, and second person's name is Kim Soo-hyun.
>>> CORRECT
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