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What makes someone beautiful.

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I think words of people make them beautiful. The words are the best means to understand someone and the best thing to express myself. The words include people's thought. So, we would be disappointed when we talk to someone who is pretty or handsome, if he or she use bad words and tell us dismally. On the other hand, we would get good impression when we talk to someone who uses good words. The impression and relationship with people depend on words. Moreover, words are close to the inner beauty. It is more important than appearance. Therefore, the words have power to make someone beautiful.

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Hi Su Jeong, thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin 


I think words of people make them beautiful.
>>Speaking smart can make people attractive. 
The words are the best means to understand someone and the best thing to express myself.
>>Expressing yourself in words are one of keys to good communication. 
The words include people's thought.
>>They can express their thoughts and ideas. 
So, we would be disappointed when we talk to someone who is pretty or handsome, if he or she use bad words and tell us dismally.
>>We will find people unattractive if they speak bad words even though they are good looking. 
 On the other hand, we would get good impression when we talk to someone who uses good words.
>>O the other hand, we will find people who speaks smart attractive. 
The impression and relationship with people depend on words. Moreover, words are close to the inner beauty.
>>Speaking is one of the biggest factors of a good impression and a better relationship. Beauty comes from within. 
It is more important than appearance.
>>It is way more important than appearance. 
Therefore, the words have power to make someone beautiful.
>>Therefore, words are more powerful than the outside beauty. 
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