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My mom\'s favorite flower

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My mom's favorite flower is freesia.
That is because the smell is good and very beautiful.
Second reason is its fresh and it seeds on spring and the smell is spring smell.
My mom likes yellow freesia.

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My mom's favorite flower is freesia.
>> This is a good sentence!

That is because the smell is good and very beautiful.
>> That is because its smell is good, and it's very beautiful.

Second reason is its fresh and it seeds on spring and the smell is spring smell.
>> The second reason is that it's fresh, and when it blooms in spring, it smells really good.

My mom likes yellow freesia.
>> This is a good sentence!

Hi, Joey! Thank you for doing your homework. And since your mom likes freesia, maybe you can give her a freesia on her birthday. 
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