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How do you feel about those tourists who visits your country?

--> I am grateful to foreign tourists who are willing to visit and like our country.
However, sometimes disorderly Chinese group tourists make me a little uncomfortable.

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Hi Bo Im

In any country in the world, there will always be a bad tourist. However, we must have policies  to b able to control rowdy and misbehaving tourists. We also need to protect our own turf and teach tourist well to behave in our places.

Thank you for this answer Bo Im! See you soon.

-T. Donna =)

I am grateful to foreign tourists who are willing to visit and like our country.
>> Correct!

However, sometimes disorderly Chinese group tourists make me a little uncomfortable.
>> However, sometimes disorderly Chinese group of tourists make me a little uncomfortable.
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