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Hello everyone? I am 'Daniel'.I am one of many Normal student.
I am sad uuuu. why I am sad?
because.... It finished a first weekend of school!!!
we will start online class!(We went to school this weekend but we don't continuous to go to school because It is suffering of covid 19.) I hate getting online class. I like meeting friends,I like studying in the school. But if we get online class.... we don't meet and we don't study in the school!!!!
my wish is to develop medicine of covid 19 and will be finishing of covid 19!!!!

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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

why am I sad?
>>Why am I sad?

It finished a first weekend of school!!!
>>I finished the first week of school!!!

we will start online class!(We went to school this weekend but we don't continuous to go to school because It is suffering of covid 19.)
>>We will start the online class!(We went to school this week but w  are not allowed to to go to school continuously because we are suffering from COVID 19.)

But if we get online class.... we don't meet and we don't study in the school!!!!
>>But if we  had the online class, we won't be able to meet and we won't be able to study at school!!!!.


my wish is to develop medicine of covid 19 and will be finishing of covid 19!!!!
>>I wish is that someone would develop a medicine for COVID 19 and COVID 19 will be finished. 
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