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Use HAS, HAVE, and HAD in correct sentences.

-She has a baby
-Jenny has a glasses

-People have a dream .
-Maybe,My Cats have a plan for escape the home

-her family's had a sick last night. Because they ate rotten food in dinner

-my cat had a dream about fly to the sky.but she gave up because she is so chubby..



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I need practice more about "have".
So I will study in weekend.
Have a wonderful weekend teacher donna!
Thank you for your nice teaching !
See you 🙂

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Hello there again Jennie!

Your sentences below are very good! If you can see, you just have to place a period at the end of all the sentences. Also, use capital letters at the start of the sentence. 

We will practice to use "have" more in class so you can master it very well. Thank you as well for doing your best in pronouncing so well and doing your homework all the time even if you are so busy at work. 

Have a great weekend! ^^

-T. Donna =)

-She has a baby
>> Correct!
Or: She has a baby. (Put  a period at the end of the sentence.)

-Jenny has a glasses
>> Jenny has glasses.

-People have a dream .
>> People have dreams.

-Maybe, My Cats have a plan for escape the home
>> Maybe, my cats have a plan to escape from home.

-her family's had a sick last night. Because they ate rotten food in dinner
>> Her family had a sickness last night because they ate rotten food at dinner.

-my cat had a dream about fly to the sky.but she gave up because she is so chubby..
>> My cat had a dream about flying to the sky but she gave up because she is so chubby.


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I need practice more about "have".
>> I need more practice about "have".

So I will study in weekend.
>> So I will study it over the weekend.

Have a wonderful weekend teacher donna!
>> Correct!
Or: Have a wonderful weekend teacher Donna!

Thank you for your nice teaching !
>> Correct!

See you!
>> Correct!
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