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I've been able to learn two words and one sentence over the course of this week.

First, let's take an example from second hand and pants
Used: "I bought my cello at a thrift store"
Pants: "I think that girl's pants are very attractive"

I found the sentence "I am not into fashion".
I've come to realize that "She's not good for the realm" could be expressed like that!

Teacher! Please look forward to next week!

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Hello, Maria!

Happy Monday! (^_^)

Thank you so much for this composition. I've read it well.
It's a good thing that you pay attention to new words and expressions.
I hope you'll be able to use them on your own in the future.
See you later!

__T. Mayleen :)


I've been able to learn two words and one sentence over the course of this week.
>>> 
I was able to learn two new words and one expression over the course this week.
>>> OR: I learned three new expressions from this week's course.

First, let's take an example from second hand and pants
>>> First, let's take an example from second hand and pants.
RE: PUNCTATION MARK.
Used: "I bought my cello at a thrift store"
Pants: "I think that girl's pants are very attractive"
>>> Used items/goods: "I bought my cello at a thrift store."
>>> Pants: "I think that girl's trousers are very attractive."


I found the sentence "I am not into fashion".
>>> I learned the expressions, "I am not into fashion."
I've come to realize that "She's not good for the realm" could be expressed like that!
>>> I've come to realize that "She's not good for the realm," could be expressed like that!

Teacher! Please look forward to next week!
>>> Teacher, please look forward to next week!
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