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What is special about your city? Tell me 3-5 things that a tourist may enjoy if they visit your city

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In my city have second biggest department store. Its big and clean so tourist can shopping or spend time.
Tourists can move easily in Uijeongbu. Uijeongbu has easy transportation. Especially my city howondong has two subway station near home.
Lastly Uijeongbu has famous food called budaejjigae.
Its sausage stew and its perfect to eat with rice. I think many tourist will like it.

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In my city have second biggest department store. Its big and clean so tourist can shopping or spend time.
>>> In my city, we have the second biggest department store. It's big and clean so tourists can shop and spend time here.
>>> My city has the second biggest department store. It's big and clean so tourists can shop and spend time here.
Tourists can move easily in Uijeongbu. Uijeongbu has easy transportation. Especially my city howondong has two subway station near home.
>>> Tourist can easily transport to Uijeongbu. It has an easy transportation system, especially in my area, Howondong where there are two subway stations near home.
>>> Tourist can easily transport to Uijeongbu. It has an easy transportation system, especially in my area, Howondong where there are two subway stations near my house.
Lastly Uijeongbu has famous food called budaejjigae.
>>> Lastly, Uijeongbu has a famous food called "budaejjigae".
Its sausage stew and its perfect to eat with rice. I think many tourist will like it.
>>> It is a sausage stew and it's perfect to eat with rice. I think many tourists will like it.
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